Thursday, October 14, 2010

New Title

I am still searching for the perfect title. This one hit me during the night: "A Mountain, a School and Some Clean Water" What do you think? Would you be intrigued enough to buy a book with this title?

Chapters 1 through 10 have now been edited. Working on the chapter 10 revisions this morning.


  1. I'm not sure that title really has enough draw to it.

  2. Hello - you need to make sure you still have the word Kilimanjaro in the title so it can get found via search engines or on bookshelves...

    Kilimanjaro: Climbing and Giving?
    Climbing Kilimanjaro (subtitle: Making a difference)?
    More than Kilimanjaro?
    Kilimanjaro, a school and some water?
    Kilimanjaro and beyond

    Just thinking off top of my head!


  3. Thanks to both of you for your comments. I am still searching for the perfect title. Actually, Helen, a variation of "Kilimanjaro and Beyond" is near the top of my list.

  4. Hey Barry,

    Having fun poking around your site! The search for the perfect title is always difficult... yet fun. Looking forward to seeing what you decide!